1) I learned some new vocabulary and formed this sentence: Despite explicitly mentioning to you in advance, to hold the package for me, it was returned to the sender.
2) Jetlagged in an adjective. Can it be used this way: Do you feel jetlagged? Are you jetlagged?
Please help me correct all the above sentences. I'm just a beginner. Thanks in advance.
Top answer
Number 1 is okay for informal usage. ". Number 2 is fine.
— John C.
Number 1 is okay for informal usage.
".
Number 2 is fine.
Cheers John.
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Ditch the first comma in #1. And you need the "my", no matter what. First because the sentence is already formal, and second because without the "my", you'd be suggesting that the package did the mentioning.