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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Please help! Is this gramatically correct?

1b00Without Walt Disney’s imagination, revolutionary animation achievements would not have been made, one of the most recognizable symbols in the world, Mickey Mouse, would not have been created, and both the television show 01i00Disneyland02i00 as well as the theme park of the same name would not have been created.02b02br
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02b 00 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Does this sentence have too many commas in it? Should I use a semicolon instead? And where would I put it?

— Clive

  • 02b 00 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Does this sentence have too many commas in it?
  • Should I use a semicolon instead?
  • And where would I put it?
  • 02font 00It seems OK to me as it is.
  • 02br 02br 00Achievements are not 'made'.
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01font01b00Without Walt Disney’s imagination, revolutionary animation achievements would not have 01i00taken place02i00, one of the most recognizable symbols in the world, Mickey Mouse, would not have been created, and both the television show 01i00Disneyland02i00 as well as the theme
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0I would change 01b01font00both the television show 01i00Disneyland02i00 as well as the theme park of the same name would not have been created 02font02b00to "neither the television show Disneyland nor the theme park of the same name would have been created."02br
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