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Sexanddeath Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please help in this little text. I hope the text makes any sense to you.


My trunk turn around the spine.
The spine moves in my trunk.
With a
cardiac motion on the cervical spine our head move back gracefully
and then go back into it`s place with dignity.

Conscious, intelligent human.First
of all, the most important thing is that one learns how to use his
own body to feel and use like an infant. My cells are remember. Our
body adopt like a computer.
My fresh blood is always fizz and so waving like sea,
If my head is at it`s own place.
If we follow the ancient method that which we we were born. Luck is our mate, youth is our trade.
Our Love never ends.
As long as we live, lovelives in us within us.
When breathes together every little cells
of mine. l I feel that my body became vigorous and light.

When
my blood circulation is flowing like a pure fountain.Germs and
excreta are escaping from me.

I hug you tight.
My body is my one person residence.
  

Top answer

Hi, Is this poetry? Is the spacing the way you want it to be? Are the line breaks where you want them to be?

  • Hi, Is this poetry?
  • Is the spacing the way you want it to be?
  • Are the line breaks where you want them to be?
  • Clive
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Hi,

Is this poetry?

Is the spacing the way you want it to be? Are the line breaks where you want them to be?

Clive
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Spacing is not important in this case. Well originally the text is in Hungarian. I have translated it into English. There is a some level of poetry too..
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Hi,

Here are some suggestions.

Clive

My trunk turns around my spine.
My spine moves in my trunk.
With a
cardiac motion on the cervical spine, my head
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Thank you Clive.

I really appriciate your effort. One last question.

Yesterday, I told them in the jobcentre this sentence. They didn`t understand that.

She said to me. I insist on it.

Then I replied. I am not insist on it. They didn`t understand this at all. If I would say, I don`t insist on it. This makes sense? Sensible sentence?
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Sorry, I don`t know, how this voting things are working;)
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Hi,

Yesterday, I told them in the jobcentre this sentence. They didn`t understand that.

She said to me. I insist on it.

Then I replied. I am not insist on it. They didn`t understand this at all. If I would say,

I don`t insist on it. This makes sense? Sensible sentence? Yes, it's fine.

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