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Amanaz21 Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help in assessing
How do you assess the following letter of recommendation? Do you think if it is really supportive? Please write me your ideas.
Thanks in advance
Ahura
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To whom it may concern
I learnt to know Ahura Mazda very well during the 2 years he spent studying at Utrecht. I also got to know him in another, more personal way, during a 2-week study trip to Canada.
Mazda was a bright, enthusiastic MSc student who achieved good grades. In my Drilling & Production Engineering course he achieved one of the highest grades in the class. He is questioning, asking searching questions during lectures, and is not satisfied until he has fully understood the material for himself. He is individualistic, following his own path, and is not easily swayed by group thinking. In this respect he is an ideal candidate for a PhD program.
I recommend Mazda for a PhD position. I am sure that he will carry out well-founded research and he has the capability to come up with original and provocative new ideas in his area of research. For further iinformation, feel free to contact me.
Thanks in advance
Ahura
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To whom it may concern
I learnt to know Ahura Mazda very well during the 2 years he spent studying at Utrecht. I also got to know him in another, more personal way, during a 2-week study trip to Canada.
Mazda was a bright, enthusiastic MSc student who achieved good grades. In my Drilling & Production Engineering course he achieved one of the highest grades in the class. He is questioning, asking searching questions during lectures, and is not satisfied until he has fully understood the material for himself. He is individualistic, following his own path, and is not easily swayed by group thinking. In this respect he is an ideal candidate for a PhD program.
I recommend Mazda for a PhD position. I am sure that he will carry out well-founded research and he has the capability to come up with original and provocative new ideas in his area of research. For further iinformation, feel free to contact me.
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"I also got to know him in another, more personal way, during a 2-week study trip to Canada. " *** This sentence could be read in a way which you may not intend, and readers might infer that your relationship was of an extremely close and very personal nature, if you undertstand me. The letter is fine without this sentence, so I would recommend you leave it out!
- "I also got to know him in another, more personal way, during a 2-week study trip to Canada.
- " *** This sentence could be read in a way which you may not intend, and readers might infer that your relationship was of an extremely close and very personal nature, if you undertstand me.
- The letter is fine without this sentence, so I would recommend you leave it out!
- I receive the impression from your letter of an independently minded person, who may be better at solo work than working with a group.
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"I also got to know him in another, more personal way, during a 2-week study trip to Canada. "
*** This sentence could be read in a way which you may not intend, and readers might infer that your relationship was of an extremely close and very personal nature, if you undertstand me.
The letter is fine without this sentence, so I would recommend you leave it out!
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*** This sentence could be read in a way which you may not intend, and readers might infer that your relationship was of an extremely close and very personal nature, if you undertstand me.
The letter is fine without this sentence, so I would recommend you leave it out!
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Many thanks Abbie. To be able to work alone is good but one should be able to work with others too. That's the reason I think this recommendation is not supportive but it even contains negative points. PLease let me know you ideas.
Thanks
Ahura
Thanks
Ahura
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That was the impression I received from the letter.
I've added a little about communication skills, rapport etc., which seems likely, as you got to know him well in Canada.
To whom it may concern
I got to know Ahura Mazda very well during the 2 years he spent studying at Utrecht.
Mazda was a bright, enthusiastic MSc student who achieved good grades. In
I've added a little about communication skills, rapport etc., which seems likely, as you got to know him well in Canada.
To whom it may concern
I got to know Ahura Mazda very well during the 2 years he spent studying at Utrecht.
Mazda was a bright, enthusiastic MSc student who achieved good grades. In
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