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Is this sentence grammatically correct: I have traveled around the world, visiting fifteen countries throughout North America, South America, Africa, Asia and the Caribbean, and treasured the lessons from each cultural exchange.
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Hi, Is this sentence grammatically correct: I have traveled around the world, visiting fifteen countries throughout North America, South America, Africa, Asia and the Caribbean, and treasured the lessons from each cultural exchange. The second main verb ('treasured') is so far away from the first main ('have travelled) that I would repeat the whole structure. ie I have traveled around the world, visiting fifteen countries throughout North America, South America, Africa, Asia and the Caribbean, and I have treasured the lessons from each cultural exchange.
- Hi, Is this sentence grammatically correct: I have traveled around the world, visiting fifteen countries throughout North America, South America, Africa, Asia and the Caribbean, and treasured the lessons from each cultural exchange.
- The second main verb ('treasured') is so far away from the first main ('have travelled) that I would repeat the whole structure.
- ie I have traveled around the world, visiting fifteen countries throughout North America, South America, Africa, Asia and the Caribbean, and I have treasured the lessons from each cultural exchange.
- I'd also consider using two sentences in order to emphasize the latter thought more.
- ie I have traveled around the world, visiting fifteen countries throughout North America, South America, Africa, Asia and the Caribbean .
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Hi,
Is this sentence grammatically correct: I have traveled around the world, visiting fifteen countries throughout North America, South America, Africa, Asia and the Caribbean, and treasured the lessons from each cultural exchange.
The second main verb ('treasured') is so far away from the first main ('have travelled) that I would repeat the whole structure.
ie I have traveled aro
Is this sentence grammatically correct: I have traveled around the world, visiting fifteen countries throughout North America, South America, Africa, Asia and the Caribbean, and treasured the lessons from each cultural exchange.
The second main verb ('treasured') is so far away from the first main ('have travelled) that I would repeat the whole structure.
ie I have traveled aro
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