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Napoleon0073 Posted 15 years ago
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Please help!!! Grammar check please
Hi, I am a graduate looking for a job. English is my second language, so I don't have a sense that it is right or wrong. Please help me!!!! if something sounds weird to you, please correct me. Thank you in advance.
............My keen interest in research led me to continue my education further at postgraduate level....... My interest lies on data analytics, focusing on developing the highest level of data analytic skills and be more proficient in applying dynamic methods in practical use of statistical softwares such as SAS, matlab, excel, SQL, R etc.
Additionally, I have a keen interest in learning more about project management techniques and methodologies. I am aware that these are series of steps (eg. organisation/ planning/ management) to support achieving a particular outcome of a project. However, as a graduate student, I am sure that there are much more to learn and I am passionate to learn and contribute to your team.
Furthermore, I have great interpersonal/negotiation, organizational and management skills which can be useful as a team worker. As a graduate applicant, I am aware that there are lot more to learn to be able to contribute as a fine project officer. I believe my commitment and strong willingness to actively participate in further training are valuable attributes for a candidate of this position.
Thank you for considering my application.
............My keen interest in research led me to continue my education further at postgraduate level....... My interest lies on data analytics, focusing on developing the highest level of data analytic skills and be more proficient in applying dynamic methods in practical use of statistical softwares such as SAS, matlab, excel, SQL, R etc.
Additionally, I have a keen interest in learning more about project management techniques and methodologies. I am aware that these are series of steps (eg. organisation/ planning/ management) to support achieving a particular outcome of a project. However, as a graduate student, I am sure that there are much more to learn and I am passionate to learn and contribute to your team.
Furthermore, I have great interpersonal/negotiation, organizational and management skills which can be useful as a team worker. As a graduate applicant, I am aware that there are lot more to learn to be able to contribute as a fine project officer. I believe my commitment and strong willingness to actively participate in further training are valuable attributes for a candidate of this position.
Thank you for considering my application.
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My keen interest in research led me to further pursue my education at a postgraduate level. My interest lies in data analytics, focusing on developing the highest level of data analytic skills and applying dynamic methods in practical use of statistical softwares such as SAS, matlab, Excel, SQLR, etc. Additionally, I have a vested interest in learning more about project management techniques and methodologies.
- My keen interest in research led me to further pursue my education at a postgraduate level.
- My interest lies in data analytics, focusing on developing the highest level of data analytic skills and applying dynamic methods in practical use of statistical softwares such as SAS, matlab, Excel, SQLR, etc.
- Additionally, I have a vested interest in learning more about project management techniques and methodologies.
- , organization, planning, management) to support the achievement of a particular outcome for a project.
- However, as a graduate student, I realize the benefits of ongoing instruction, and I am passionate to learn and contribute to your team.
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My keen interest in research led me to further pursue my education at a postgraduate level. My interest lies in data analytics, focusing on developing the highest level of data analytic skills and applying dynamic methods in practical use of statistical softwares such as SAS, matlab, Excel, SQLR, etc.
Additionally, I have a vested interest in learning more about project management
Additionally, I have a vested interest in learning more about project management
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