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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Please help for two sentences

You should rejected our cargo receipt if the cargo date was not for 15 Sept as our commitment. We shall accept all the discrepancy and release payment to you ASAP. The bank will deduce the discreancy fee from the payment.




Would you accept sea/air arrangement which is reduce the heavy air freight from the factory but the schedule can be kept arrive to USA before 10 November.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: You should rejected our cargo receipt if the cargo date was not for 15 Sept as our commitment. We shall accept all the discrepancy and release payment to you ASAP. The bank will deduce the discreancy fee from the payment.

  • I have underlined some problem areas: You should rejected our cargo receipt if the cargo date was not for 15 Sept as our commitment.
  • We shall accept all the discrepancy and release payment to you ASAP.
  • The bank will deduce the discreancy fee from the payment.
  • Would you accept sea/air arrangement which is reduce the heavy air freight from the factory but the schedule can be kept arrive to USA before 10 November.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

You should rejected our cargo receipt if the cargo date was not for 15 Sept as our commitment. We shall accept all the discrepancy and release payment to you ASAP. The bank will deduce the discreancy fee from the payment.

Would you accept sea/air arrangement which is reduce the heavy air freig
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You should reject our cargo receipt if the cargo date was not for Sept. 15, as per our commitment. We will accept the entire discrepancy and release the payment to you ASAP. The bank will deduct the discrepancy fee from the payment.

Will you accept a sea/air arrangment, which reduces the heavy air freight from the factory with no change in schedule (i.e. It will arrive in the USA before
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Hi teacher,

Please review and correct me again, thanks

You should reject our cargo receipt if the cargo date was not for 15 Sept as per our commitment. We will accept all the discrepancy and release payment to you ASAP. The bank will reduce the discrepancies fee from the payment.

Would you accept sea/air arrangement which is ease the heavy air freight from the factory,
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You can use Englishmaven's version (especially 'deduct'), but be sure to spell 'arrangement' correctly.

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