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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Please help for two sentences
Please find attached the invoice for 100% value, due to the tight schedule we did not charge you 30% payment prior the shipment. We shall release you the original BL as soon as we receive you payment.
Please ask us to accept your discrepancy if any in future instead of asked to our customer directly. We shall follow with them and advise you the results. Thanks for your co-operation.
Please ask us to accept your discrepancy if any in future instead of asked to our customer directly. We shall follow with them and advise you the results. Thanks for your co-operation.
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Hi, In my professional opinion, your English is not gong to improve if you simply ask us to correct all the sentences you write in your office. I suggest you try to write some shorter and simpler sentences on the topic of shipping. When you can do that without errors, you will be ready to go on to more complicated sentences.
- Hi, In my professional opinion, your English is not gong to improve if you simply ask us to correct all the sentences you write in your office.
- I suggest you try to write some shorter and simpler sentences on the topic of shipping.
- When you can do that without errors, you will be ready to go on to more complicated sentences.
- If you want to write and post some such sentences, I'd be happy to discuss them with you and to help you the best I can.
- Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
In my professional opinion, your English is not gong to improve if you simply ask us to correct all the sentences you write in your office.
I suggest you try to write some shorter and simpler sentences on the topic of shipping. When you can do that without errors, you will be ready to go on to more complicated sentences.
If you want to write and post some such sent
In my professional opinion, your English is not gong to improve if you simply ask us to correct all the sentences you write in your office.
I suggest you try to write some shorter and simpler sentences on the topic of shipping. When you can do that without errors, you will be ready to go on to more complicated sentences.
If you want to write and post some such sent
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Hi Clive,
Message noted. I would like to rewrite my sentences, please review again if you have time.
Please find the attached invoice in full amount. We shall not charge the 30% deposit before shipment this time as the schedule is tight. However,
Message noted. I would like to rewrite my sentences, please review again if you have time.
Please find the attached invoice in full amount. We shall not charge the 30% deposit before shipment this time as the schedule is tight. However,
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Hi,
I would like to rewrite my sentences, please review again if you have time.
Please find the attached invoice in full amount. Do you need to say 'for the full amount'? I don't see why.
We shall notcharge require the 30% deposit before shipment this time as the schedule is ti
I would like to rewrite my sentences, please review again if you have time.
Please find the attached invoice in full amount. Do you need to say 'for the full amount'? I don't see why.
We shall not
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