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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Please help for an article
Would a teacher help correct this paragraph for an article please?
Behind the scenes of the fair[, there] are 3 young ladies full of ideas and projects. Their names : Jane, Laura and Gabby. Entrepreneurs at heart, not for a second did they hesitate to go on this adventure/go through with this project. Being that they are a wedding planner, photographer and event designer respectively, they complement each other perfectly professionally. Ambitious, they would like to bring the prestige of those world-renowned fairs but with a touch/hint of originality to/in Europe and thus export their concept to different countries each year.
A real revolution for/in the industry. Concurrently, the 3 ladies will launch an original european wedding blog that will allow everyone to follow everything « wedding » and find the exhibitors that will/would have caught their attention.
Would show,prove , attest , be a testament to all work?
Marriage is a big and beautiful commitment that ___ your love.
Thanks
Behind the scenes of the fair[, there] are 3 young ladies full of ideas and projects. Their names : Jane, Laura and Gabby. Entrepreneurs at heart, not for a second did they hesitate to go on this adventure/go through with this project. Being that they are a wedding planner, photographer and event designer respectively, they complement each other perfectly professionally. Ambitious, they would like to bring the prestige of those world-renowned fairs but with a touch/hint of originality to/in Europe and thus export their concept to different countries each year.
A real revolution for/in the industry. Concurrently, the 3 ladies will launch an original european wedding blog that will allow everyone to follow everything « wedding » and find the exhibitors that will/would have caught their attention.
Would show,prove , attest , be a testament to all work?
Marriage is a big and beautiful commitment that ___ your love.
Thanks
Top answer
) will have caught As for the sentence with the blank to be filled in: keep in mind that 'marriage' is a (life-long) state, while 'wedding' is what starts it off legally. That may affect your choice of words.
- ) will have caught As for the sentence with the blank to be filled in: keep in mind that 'marriage' is a (life-long) state, while 'wedding' is what starts it off legally.
- That may affect your choice of words.
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take on this project
touch of originality
to Europe
revolution for the industry
European
<<pertaining to weddings>> (I have no problem with what you have, but this might be more understandable.)
will have caught
As for the sentence with the blank to be filled in: keep in mind that 'marriage' is a (life-long) state,
touch of originality
to Europe
revolution for the industry
European
<<pertaining to weddings>> (I have no problem with what you have, but this might be more understandable.)
will have caught
As for the sentence with the blank to be filled in: keep in mind that 'marriage' is a (life-long) state,
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