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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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I made the online booking on last Friday, but it may some problem during the transferring, the booking is not success and need to re-do again today.

  

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Hi, Trying to write this as one long sentence is causing you to make errors. You need to split it into two, or more. shorter sentences.

— Clive

  • Hi, Trying to write this as one long sentence is causing you to make errors.
  • You need to split it into two, or more.
  • shorter sentences.
  • Try again, if you wish, and I'll be happy to check it again for you.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

Trying to write this as one long sentence is causing you to make errors.

You need to split it into two, or more. shorter sentences.




Try again, if you wish, and I'll be happy to check it again for you.




Best wishes, Clive
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Hi Clive,

Thanks to look again.

I made the online booking on last Friday. However, some error during the transferring and the booking is not success. We need to re-do again today.
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Hi,

I made the online booking on last Friday. However, some error during the transferring and the booking is not success. We need to re-do again today.



I made the online booking last Friday. However, some error occured during the transferring and the booking was not successful. I need to redo it today.



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