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Ushashri Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

please help edit this "thanks" letter & need suggestion on content, please

Dear xxx,



Our visit to (organization, country) on (date) was most instructive and our fruitful discussions were of great interest to our work in (country). In particular, I am most grateful to you for kindly sparing yourself and time to meet with us, and rendering us informative briefing, as well as the excellent arrangement. I hope you will find it possible in the future to pay a visit to (city, country) where you can be assured of a warm welcome.



Accordingly, I wish to convey our sincere thanks and gratitude to you and your colleagues concerned for all the arrangements regarding this visit.



Thank you again for your kind cooperation.



Yours sincerely,

xxx
  

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Hi, I've suggested a few changes. Best wishes, Clive Dear ***, Our visit to (organization, country) on (date) was most instructive and our fruitful discussions were of great interest to our work in (country). In particular, I am most grateful to you for kindly sparing the time to meet with us and to supply us with such an informative briefing, as well offering us such excellent arrangement s .

  • Hi, I've suggested a few changes.
  • Best wishes, Clive Dear ***, Our visit to (organization, country) on (date) was most instructive and our fruitful discussions were of great interest to our work in (country).
  • In particular, I am most grateful to you for kindly sparing the time to meet with us and to supply us with such an informative briefing, as well offering us such excellent arrangement s .
  • I hope you will find it possible in the future to pay a visit to (city, country) , where you can be assured of a warm welcome.
  • Accordingly, I wish to convey our sincere thanks and gratitude to you and all your colleagues for this memorable visit.
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Hi,

I've suggested a few changes.

Best wishes, Clive

Dear ***,

Our visit to (organization, country) on (date) was most instructive and our fruitful discussions were of great interest to our work in (country). In particular, I am most grateful to you for kindly sparing the time to m
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Mr.Clive,

thank you so much for your always ready assistant !!!! [A]

Ushashri

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