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Sooyun Posted 18 years ago
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Dear Sir ,
I am grateful to you for your help howerver Nante is so far from my hometown and at the present time i am busy with my study at school .
United States was a good destination for people arond the world studying , but I am very embarassed because of a diversity of their systeme educaion. So, i am writing to ask you to send me a list of High School issue I-20 to foreign student . Therefore , I could select the suitable school for me , and after that I would be really happy to meet you and we could discuss more about that .

Yours Sincerely,
Charmane
  

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Dear Mr [ surname ] , I am grateful to you for your help , but Nante is very far from my hometown , and at the present time I am busy at school. The United States is a good place to study , but I am confused because of the diversity of their education system. I am writing to ask you to send me a list of high schools that issue Form I-29 s to foreign students.

  • Dear Mr [ surname ] , I am grateful to you for your help , but Nante is very far from my hometown , and at the present time I am busy at school.
  • The United States is a good place to study , but I am confused because of the diversity of their education system.
  • I am writing to ask you to send me a list of high schools that issue Form I-29 s to foreign students.
  • I could then select a suitable school, and after that I would be very happy to meet you for further discussion .
  • Yours sincerely , Charmane
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Dear Mr [surname],

I am grateful to you for your help, but Nante is very far from my hometown, and at the present time I am busy at school.

The United States is a good place to study, but I am confused because of the diversity of their education system. I am writing to ask you

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