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Debangkok Posted 16 years ago
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Dear all,
I have interest in MBA program and I would like to have some detail and sugestion
The detail as below.
Dear sir,
I have interest in your program and I would like to know that the office (study room) of the coming batch (2011) would move to the new bulding and I would like to sugest that application form and its process should make modernization ( because it ' so old not modern)
Thank you for your information inadvance
Best regards,
I have interest in MBA program and I would like to have some detail and sugestion
The detail as below.
Dear sir,
I have interest in your program and I would like to know that the office (study room) of the coming batch (2011) would move to the new bulding and I would like to sugest that application form and its process should make modernization ( because it ' so old not modern)
Thank you for your information inadvance
Best regards,
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Hi, I have interest in MBA program and I would like to have some detail and sugestion The detail as below. Dear sir, I have interest in your program and I would like to know that the office (study room) of the coming batch (2011) would move to the new bulding and I would like to sugest that application form and its process should make modernization ( because it ' so old not modern) Thank you for your information inadvance I suggest this. Dear Sir or Madam, I am interested in your program.
- Hi, I have interest in MBA program and I would like to have some detail and sugestion The detail as below.
- Dear sir, I have interest in your program and I would like to know that the office (study room) of the coming batch (2011) would move to the new bulding and I would like to sugest that application form and its process should make modernization ( because it ' so old not modern) Thank you for your information inadvance I suggest this.
- Dear Sir or Madam, I am interested in your program.
- I would like to know if the class for the coming year (2011) will move to the new building.
- In addition, I would like to suggest that the application form and its process should be modernized.
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Hi,
I have interest in MBA program and I would like to have some detail and sugestion
The detail as below.
Dear sir,
I have interest in your program and I would like to know that the office (study room) of the coming batch (2011) would move to the new bulding and I would like to sugest that application form and its process should make modernization ( because it
I have interest in MBA program and I would like to have some detail and sugestion
The detail as below.
Dear sir,
I have interest in your program and I would like to know that the office (study room) of the coming batch (2011) would move to the new bulding and I would like to sugest that application form and its process should make modernization ( because it
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