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Tuongvan Posted 18 years ago
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Hi teachers,
Could you please edit my sentences below if something is not ok:
As ever in the past this year the company will organize a vacation trip to HaLong Bay .The cost for each staffmember for this trip will be $150.If any staffmember cannot join this trip due to duty requirements .he or she will receive an amount of money representing the cost for each staffmember .Those who have conditions to join the trip will not receive any money .
Thank you in advance
Could you please edit my sentences below if something is not ok:
As ever in the past this year the company will organize a vacation trip to HaLong Bay .The cost for each staffmember for this trip will be $150.If any staffmember cannot join this trip due to duty requirements .he or she will receive an amount of money representing the cost for each staffmember .Those who have conditions to join the trip will not receive any money .
Thank you in advance
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Those who have conditions to join the trip will not receive any money . The cost for each staff member will be $150. he or she will receive an amount of money representing the cost for each staff member .
- Those who have conditions to join the trip will not receive any money .
- The cost for each staff member will be $150.
- he or she will receive an amount of money representing the cost for each staff member .
- Those who have conditions to join the trip will not receive any money .
- I don't understand the underlined parts.
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Hi,
Could you please edit my sentences below if something is not ok:
As ever in the past this year the company will organize a vacation trip to HaLong Bay .The cost for each staffmember for this trip will be $150.If any staffmember cannot join this trip due to duty requirements .he or she will receive an amount of money representing the cost for each staffmember .Those who have con
Could you please edit my sentences below if something is not ok:
As ever in the past this year the company will organize a vacation trip to HaLong Bay .The cost for each staffmember for this trip will be $150.If any staffmember cannot join this trip due to duty requirements .he or she will receive an amount of money representing the cost for each staffmember .Those who have con
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Hi Clive,
I mean that If Every year each worker/employee are entitled to a vacation trip organized by the company and the company will pay all the costs of the trip .Suppose each worker is given $150 for the trip ,then for 10 workers the total costs of the trip will be $1500, and this money will not be given to workers ,but it will be used to pay for the trip.If a worker does not join the t
I mean that If Every year each worker/employee are entitled to a vacation trip organized by the company and the company will pay all the costs of the trip .Suppose each worker is given $150 for the trip ,then for 10 workers the total costs of the trip will be $1500, and this money will not be given to workers ,but it will be used to pay for the trip.If a worker does not join the t
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Hi,
I mean that If Every year each worker/employee are entitled to a vacation trip organized by the company and the company will pay all the costs of the trip .Suppose each worker is given $150 for the trip ,then for 10 workers the total costs of the trip will be $1500, and this money will not be given to workers ,but it will be used to pay for the trip.If a worker does not join the tri
I mean that If Every year each worker/employee are entitled to a vacation trip organized by the company and the company will pay all the costs of the trip .Suppose each worker is given $150 for the trip ,then for 10 workers the total costs of the trip will be $1500, and this money will not be given to workers ,but it will be used to pay for the trip.If a worker does not join the tri
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Thank you very much Clive .Your edit is excellent.That is what I want to say 
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