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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Please help correct the email

I have to send an email to my boss in Singapore about the test result of the staff, please help me correct it in terms of grammar and word choice. Thanks a lot

Based on the placement test result, I category the staff into three groups:
The first group: they can go straight to study Business English, book: Market Leader, elementary level.
The second group: they have to attend two more classes about general English, after that they can attend business English.
The third group: They are really beginners of English. If they want to attend business English classes, they have to complete at least 4 courses in general English first.

Please find the attached the test result of the staff.
  

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It should be Based on the results of the placement test, I have categorized the staff into three groups: The first group can go straight into studying business English, using the Market Leader book at the elementary level. The second group has to attend two more classes about general English, and after that can move into business English. The third group is made up of complete beginners.

  • It should be Based on the results of the placement test, I have categorized the staff into three groups: The first group can go straight into studying business English, using the Market Leader book at the elementary level.
  • The second group has to attend two more classes about general English, and after that can move into business English.
  • The third group is made up of complete beginners.
  • If they want to attend business English classes, they have to complete at least four courses in general English first.
  • Attached, please find the staff test result.
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It should be
Based on the results of the placement test, I have categorized the staff into three groups:
The first group can go straight into studying business English, using the Market Leader book at the elementary level. The second group has to attend two more classes about general English, and after that can move into business English. The third group is made up of complete begi
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Based on the placement test results, I categorized the staff into three groups:
The members of the first group: they can go straight to study Business English, using the book: Market Leader, elementary level.
The members of the second group: they have to attend two more classes about general English, after that they can attend B

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