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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help correct my letter... to send uregenly
Would you please correct my letter that I need to send urgently? This is a letter of acceptance of a job offer. Immigration procedures/paperwork need to be done before joining the company, so I want to say: I look to join them as soon as all the formalities are completed
My name
My Address
Name and Address
of the addressee
Dear Mr. X,
With regard to our recent communication, I am pleased to inform you that I accept your offer for the position of a Construction Equipment Technician with “Company Name” in Gabon.
It was certainly not an easy decision, but I am confident it will be a good experience and I am determined to make a positive contribution to the company in general and to project teams in particular.
I, hereby, also agree on the terms and conditions of the employment as per our recent email correspondence.
I have already notified my current employer about my departure and I look forward to starting my new job as soon as all the necessary procedures are followed through.
Kind Regards,
Name
My name
My Address
Name and Address
of the addressee
Dear Mr. X,
With regard to our recent communication, I am pleased to inform you that I accept your offer for the position of a Construction Equipment Technician with “Company Name” in Gabon.
It was certainly not an easy decision, but I am confident it will be a good experience and I am determined to make a positive contribution to the company in general and to project teams in particular.
I, hereby, also agree on the terms and conditions of the employment as per our recent email correspondence.
I have already notified my current employer about my departure and I look forward to starting my new job as soon as all the necessary procedures are followed through.
Kind Regards,
Name
Top answer
Align all text to the left margin. I have underlined some problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage: My name My Address Date Name and Address of the addressee Dear Mr. X, With regard to our recent communication, I am pleased to i nform you that I accept your offer for the position of a Construction Equipment Technician with "Company Name" in Gabon.
- Align all text to the left margin.
- I have underlined some problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage: My name My Address Date Name and Address of the addressee Dear Mr.
- X, With regard to our recent communication, I am pleased to i nform you that I accept your offer for the position of a Construction Equipment Technician with "Company Name" in Gabon.
- It was certainly not an easy decision, but I am confident it will be a good experience , and I am determined to make a positive contribution to the company in general and to the project teams in particular.
- I , hereby, also agree on the terms and conditions of the employment as per our recent email correspondence.
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Align all text to the left margin. I have underlined some problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage:
My name
My Address
Date
Name and Address
of the addressee
Dear Mr. X,
My name
My Address
Date
Name and Address
of the addressee
Dear Mr. X,
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