Please help correct my grammar

Hi Zoe,

Why don't you register? Then your posts will appear right away!

There are a number of ways you can say this. The only thing you MUST change is to put a period where you have your first comma.

The report has been created. - Don't you want to say "I have created the report"? Either way is okay, but if you did it, say you did it!

Please have a

GG's advice about corrections and about registering are good!

Hi Barbara,

Thank you for your correction. BTW, how can register to become the member of this forums? (I'm so silly

Hi Zoe,

In the upper right corner of your screen, it should say "Join."

http://www.EnglishForward.com/user/CreateUser.aspx?ReturnUrl=/logout.aspx

Grammar GeekHi Zoe,

In the upper right corner of your screen, it should say "Join."

http://www.EnglishForward.com/user/CreateUser.aspx?ReturnUrl=/logout.aspx

Make sure you are signed in - if it doesn't say "welcome back" you will have to log in.

hy i am very student but my english is not good.I want to improve my english.bcz its international language.I become a great buisness man in world so i can improve my english

Dear [Name?]

Hi: I have created the reports and please have a look at it. If there is having any problems or changes, please do contact me.

Regards,

Zoe

After reading from your writing, I can see that you are really poor in English. xD

As far as I can say that I am not good in English, either. Still needs to be improve.

Hi

The report has been created, please have a look, and advise me if there is any place that needs further improvement."

Kamay

you don't have a right to talk to me like this