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Pitak Posted 21 years ago
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Please help correct my english, I am applying for a job at home and lifestyle section in a departmentstore... Thank u:)

I am an interior design graduate who mainly interest in the subject of art, architecture and furniture design. Through six years of studying art and design I have developed great communication skills and good understanding of materials. In addition to my degree in interior design, I have also developed strong customer services, team management and organizational skills while working in a furniture department team at Habitat Ltd. With these qualities and strong belief in my abilities, I wish to become part of Selfridges&co.

Please kindly consider my application, I am looking forward to hearing from you and would welcome the opportunity to meet you.
  

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I am an interior design graduate who is mainly interested in the subjects of art, architecture and furniture design. Through six years of studying art and design, I have developed good communication skills and understanding of materials. In addition to my degree in interior design, I have also developed strong customer services, team management and organizational skills while working on the furniture department team at Habitat Ltd.

— Mister Micawber

  • I am an interior design graduate who is mainly interested in the subjects of art, architecture and furniture design.
  • Through six years of studying art and design, I have developed good communication skills and understanding of materials.
  • In addition to my degree in interior design, I have also developed strong customer services, team management and organizational skills while working on the furniture department team at Habitat Ltd.
  • With these qualities and a strong belief in my own abilities, I think that I can be a valuable addition to Selfridge's & Co.
  • Thank you very much for this opportunity to present my application.
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I am an interior design graduate who is mainly interested in the subjects of art, architecture and furniture design. Through six years of studying art and design, I have developed good communication skills and understanding of materials. In addition to my degree in interior design, I have also developed strong customer services, team management and organizational skills while working on the furnit
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