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Alc24 Posted 14 years ago
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Please help correct Email

Could you please help me correct this email and make it natural please?

Hello,

I've subscribed to summer league pass, when I purchased the pass, I was directed to paypal and for some reason I punched in my credit card numbers and paypal prompted a message saying since they couldn't contact me that the payment had been declined, so I retried and it said the same thing, I got an email from summer league pass saying that had purchased the pass twice, two separate emails and that my payment had gone through and hadn't been declined.
Furhermore I can't seem to access my summer league account for some reason, it might be a regional issue but it said that I could watch it in France. So I really don't know why.
Could you let me know what to do and how to get a refund on one of the 2 payments.

Thank you in advance
  

Top answer

You may want to include the error message verbatim. Hello, I am having a problem with the Summer League Pass. When I tried to purchase it via PayPal, the system declined my payment because I could not be contacted.

  • You may want to include the error message verbatim.
  • Hello, I am having a problem with the Summer League Pass.
  • When I tried to purchase it via PayPal, the system declined my payment because I could not be contacted.
  • I then attempted once more to pay for the item, but was faced with the same error.
  • com confirming that I had successfully purchased the pass twice.
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You may want to include the error message verbatim.

Hello,

I am having a problem with the Summer League Pass. When I tried to purchase it via PayPal, the system declined my payment because I could not be contacted. I then attempted once more to pay for the item, but was faced with the same error. However, I did receive two e-mails from the NBA.com confirming that I had successful
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Quick thing
Help me issue??
or help me and issue?

Could you please help me issue a refund for the two payments?

For one of the 2 payments

btw

Its the nba.com site, its not a scam
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can you say "prompted a message" or something like that?
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alc24Quick thing
Help me issue??
or help me and issue?
Ah, I made a mistake. This should do:

Could you please help me gain full access to my account and issue me a refund for one of the two payments?


can you say "prompted a message" or something like that?
I'm not really sure. How about this:

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