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Liquidtexture Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help compose a Thank you letter.
Hi,
I need help to compose a thank you letter after a very succesful ball game.
Here's what I wanted to say:
• I would like to thank the organizers for staging this event in a private sports club.
• The facility is very nice, we are very comfortable and relax especially for the small kids that can run around with out worrying.
• The game was so close. We felt that we are just lucky to win it.
• The karaoke party after the dinner was also great. We will try to match your singing talent next time.
• The whole experience was good and I hope we will have more participants next year.
Sorry. My English composition and grammar is not good. Your help is much appreciated.
Thank you.
Fred
I need help to compose a thank you letter after a very succesful ball game.
Here's what I wanted to say:
• I would like to thank the organizers for staging this event in a private sports club.
• The facility is very nice, we are very comfortable and relax especially for the small kids that can run around with out worrying.
• The game was so close. We felt that we are just lucky to win it.
• The karaoke party after the dinner was also great. We will try to match your singing talent next time.
• The whole experience was good and I hope we will have more participants next year.
Sorry. My English composition and grammar is not good. Your help is much appreciated.
Thank you.
Fred
Top answer
Hello, liquidtexture - and welcome to English Forums. All you need to do is take the points you have already written and put them into paragraphs. Start with 'Dear [organizer's name]'.
- Hello, liquidtexture - and welcome to English Forums.
- All you need to do is take the points you have already written and put them into paragraphs.
- Start with 'Dear [organizer's name]'.
- Post your letter here and we will review it for you.
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Hello, liquidtexture - and welcome to English Forums.
All you need to do is take the points you have already written and put them into paragraphs. Start with 'Dear [organizer's name]'. Post your letter here and we will review it for you.
All you need to do is take the points you have already written and put them into paragraphs. Start with 'Dear [organizer's name]'. Post your letter here and we will review it for you.
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Here's my draft:
Dear Mr._____,
Thank you very much for staging this years event in _____ sports club. The facility is very nice. I can see that all our players are relax, comfortable and enjoying every minute of it especially the kids that explore the sorrounding area with out us worrying.
This time the compitition is more fun because it was decided only by one
Dear Mr._____,
Thank you very much for staging this years event in _____ sports club. The facility is very nice. I can see that all our players are relax, comfortable and enjoying every minute of it especially the kids that explore the sorrounding area with out us worrying.
This time the compitition is more fun because it was decided only by one
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