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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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According to this year's experience, there will be private contributions to the symphony. Besides, there will be a lot of attendance in the concerts.
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According to this year''s experience, the private contributions to the symphony and the attendance to the concerts will be high.
According to this year's experience, there will be private contributions to the symphony. Besides, there will be a lot of attendance in the concerts.
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According to this year''s experience, the private contributions to the symphony and the attendance to the concerts will be high.
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This year's experience suggests that there will be substantial private contributions to the symphony and good attendance at the concerts.
- This year's experience suggests that there will be substantial private contributions to the symphony and good attendance at the concerts.
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This year's experience suggests that there will be substantial private contributions to the symphony and good attendance at the concerts.
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Thank you, Mister Micawber. How about the following:
We cannot find the evidence that the symphony was fully self-supporting in last year, not to mention we don't know the real situation in next year.
We cannot find the evidence that the symphony was fully self-supporting in last year, not to mention we don't know the real situation in next year.
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We find no evidence that the symphony was fully self-supporting last year, and we don't know the real situation for next year.
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