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Adonis Posted 20 years ago
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Please help check my homework. Thank you

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01font001.Whether a nation's major cities can be prosperous and progressive is primarily dependent on how many budgets the government funds them. However, the development of a nation's major cities always interferes with the preservation of its cultural traditions and damages its historical relics and cultural heritage.02br
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002. When the government tries to develop Beijine city into the modern one, many historical and old buildings were pulled down and supplanted by skyscrapers.02br
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003. Because more than ten million people live in Beijine, the government has to expand its infrastructures in order to improve the standard of people's life. 02br
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004. It is better for remote areas and rural cities to keep its undeveloped lands and old buildings in a natural state than in the urban cities. 02br
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005. China's past economic development relied on the agriculture industry. That farmers spare on energy in cultivating their fruits, grains, produce typically represents the symbol of China's traditional culture: diligence02br
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0my mind was mixed up about that sentence is "01font002. When the government tries to develop Beijine city into the modern one, many historical and old buildings were pulled down and supplanted by skyscrapers."02font02br
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001. Whether a nation's manjor cities can prosper and move forward is primary dependent on how well they are funded from the national government. It is also important to point out that the development of those major cities usually affects the preservation of their cultural traditions and heritage and damages their historical relics. 02br
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