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Dianaksh06 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

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i love watching movies because they opne up my mind and bring me through mental adventures to places i've never been to in real life.
  

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Hello Diana, and welcome to the forums. You are very close, and your idea is understandable, but not 100% correct. Please always start your sentences with a capital letter and remember that I is always capitalized.

  • Hello Diana, and welcome to the forums.
  • You are very close, and your idea is understandable, but not 100% correct.
  • Please always start your sentences with a capital letter and remember that I is always capitalized.
  • open is spelled incorrectly.
  • mental adventures doesn't sound natural.
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Hello Diana, and welcome to the forums.

You are very close, and your idea is understandable, but not 100% correct.

Please always start your sentences with a capital letter and remember that I is always capitalized.

open is spelled incorrectly.

mental adventures doesn't sound natural. Perhaps "imagination."

Because you say "bring me.

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