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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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We will compensate 6 sets new goods to you and ship along with 5th shipment. Please void the attached credit note and refund USD200 to us ASAP. Would you monitor the cargo loading on 05 Aug?
  

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Are you providing the new goods as compensation (for damaged goods or for some other cost)? I would explain a little more. Here is my suggested wording: To compensate for (the damaged goods) we will add 6 new sets to our 5th shipment to you.

— Doctor D

  • Are you providing the new goods as compensation (for damaged goods or for some other cost)?
  • I would explain a little more.
  • Here is my suggested wording: To compensate for (the damaged goods) we will add 6 new sets to our 5th shipment to you.
  • Please void the attached credit note and refund USD 200 to us ASAP.
  • Also, would you monitor the cargo being loaded on 5 Aug?
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Are you providing the new goods as compensation (for damaged goods or for some other cost)? I would explain a little more.

Here is my suggested wording:

To compensate for (the damaged goods) we will add 6 new sets to our 5th shipment to you. Please void the attached credit note and refund USD 200 to us ASAP. Also, would you monitor the cargo being loaded on 5 Aug?
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