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Hi teachers. Is this sentence/paragraph grammatically correct and is it smooth or is it way too long and would you break it up into two sentences maybe?
A group of police officers moves, approaches the building, when suddenly a blast roars from the the fifth floor followed by an explosion as/when the terrorists' missiles hits the police officers, blowing them up.
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You could break this up for drama, but nothing wrong grammatically as is, once you clean it up a little. For example: A group of police officers approaches the building, when suddenly a blast roars from the fifth floor , followed by an explosion as the terrorists' missiles hit the police officers. Questions?
- You could break this up for drama, but nothing wrong grammatically as is, once you clean it up a little.
- For example: A group of police officers approaches the building, when suddenly a blast roars from the fifth floor , followed by an explosion as the terrorists' missiles hit the police officers.
- Questions?
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You could break this up for drama, but nothing wrong grammatically as is, once you clean it up a little. For example:
A group of police officers approaches the building, when suddenly a blast roars from the fifth floor, followed by an explosion as the terrorists' missiles hit the police officers.
Questions?
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