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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Dear Sir/Madam,

Please help me to correct those sentence, I tried to explain some instruction on elearning website. Your response is highly appreciated.

  1. Coordinate with Manager of departments to remind trainees who have not yet started their lesssion after ½ course time.
  2. Follow up, evaluate progress of the reading and testing to ensure 100% of trainees completed their taks ahead of time.

Thank you and Best regards,

  

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Coordinate with department managers to remind trainees who have not yet started their lesson after half the course time has passed that they must begin their work. Follow up, evaluate the progress of the reading and testing to ensure 100% of trainees completed their tasks ahead of time. (Why do you want them to complete tasks ahead of time?

  • Coordinate with department managers to remind trainees who have not yet started their lesson after half the course time has passed that they must begin their work.
  • Follow up, evaluate the progress of the reading and testing to ensure 100% of trainees completed their tasks ahead of time.
  • (Why do you want them to complete tasks ahead of time?
  • ) Thank you and best regards,
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  1. Coordinate with department managers to remind trainees who have not yet started their lesson after half the course time has passed that they must begin their work.
  2. Follow up, evaluate the progress of the reading and testing to ensure 100% of trainees completed their tasks ahead of time. (Why do you want them to complete tasks ahead of time? That doesn't make sense to me.)

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