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Gmax Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Please help

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

Each video will carry a specific health message to the public together with the company logo.

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'Specific' seems quite unnecessary, and it should be shortened. Each video will carry the company logo and a health message to the public.

— Mister Micawber

  • 'Specific' seems quite unnecessary, and it should be shortened.
  • Each video will carry the company logo and a health message to the public.
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'Specific' seems quite unnecessary, and it should be shortened.

Each video will carry the company logo and a health message to the public.

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