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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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"The number of people who are diagnosed with chronic diseases is rising rapidly owing to unhealthy diet and sedentary lifestyle."
  

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“The number of people … is rising rapidly.”
who are diagnosed with chronic diseases, caused by unhealthy diet and sedentary lifestyle,
So:
“The number of people who are diagnosed with chronic diseases caused by unhealthy diet and sedentary lifestyle is rising rapidly.”

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