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Janhabhee Jaiswal Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Hey guys,

I want help to write a composition on earthquake, I tried a lot myself but i couldn't write much , i mean i have to write it of 250-300 words but all i could write is of about 100 words because i don't have much idea about natural calamities .I thought of to write about the Nepal earthquake,which happened recently but i was unable to make the body of the composition correctly.

Can you please help me? Emotion: smile
  

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Hello, Janhabhee Jaiswal — and welcome to English Forums. Janhabhee Jaiswal all i could write is of about 100 words OK, then let's see those.

  • Hello, Janhabhee Jaiswal — and welcome to English Forums.
  • Janhabhee Jaiswal all i could write is of about 100 words OK, then let's see those.
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Hello, Janhabhee Jaiswal — and welcome to English Forums.
Janhabhee Jaiswal all i could write is of about 100 words
OK, then let's see those.
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Welcome to the site, Janhabhee Jaiswal.

We'll help you correct your composition, but we won't write it for you. There is a great deal in newspapers and on the internet about the Nepal earthquake to give you lots of ideas.
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ok here u go :
Earthquake is one of the terrible natural calamities.Wherever it occurs,the surface of the earth starts shaking.As a result , it causes great destruction.

This year,on 25th April, a terrible earthquake occurred in Nepal with the ratings of 7.9 on the richter scale.It was the morning time when the people were going to their offices to work and all of a sudden the earth
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Here is your work so far repaired:

Earthquakes are a terrible natural calamity. Wherever one occurs,the surface of the earth shakes, causing great destruction. On April 25th this year, a 7.9 earthquake occurred in Nepal. It was in the morning, when people were going to work, and suddenly the earth started shaking. Trees were uprooted, roads cracked badly, and buildings collapsed. In
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Thank you very much mister micawber and fivejedjon , for you fast replies Emotion: smile
I'll try to complete my composition as soon as possib
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OK so i wrote this :

Earthquakes are dreadful and terrible natural calamity. When it occurs,the earth starts shaking, either violently or mildly. When it shakes violently , it causes great damage to life and properties of people but when it shakes mildly, then there is almost no damage.Earthquakes occur when the plates under the surface of the earth collide or slide under or above each
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I have fixed the major grammar problems:

Earthquakes are a dreadful natural calamity. When one occurs, the earth starts shaking. When it shakes violently, it causes great damage to life and property, but when it shakes mildly, then there is almost no damage. Earthquakes occur when the plates under the surface of the earth collide or slide under or over each other.

On Ap
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Thank you very much for correcting my composition Emotion: smile

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