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Hi guys. I'm trying to use this "saying"  for my project in my own way and need some help whether it makes sense. "As a well spent day brings happy sleep, so is the used of Kems Insecticide Spray kills mosquitoes dead at night.

GPY · Accepted Answer

There are a couple of errors in English, but more importantly I do not understand the connection between the two things. Their association seems bizarre to me.

Hardtriq · Answer

I totally agree with you and i think you answered my problem. But does this also makes sense" As a well spent day brings happy sleep, so is the use of Kems Insecticide Spray give a Goodnight sleep" Is this meaningful?

GPY · Answer

hardtriqI totally agree with you and i think you answered my problem. But does this also makes sense" As a well spent day brings happy sleep, so is the use of Kems Insecticide Spray give a Goodnight sleep" Is this meaningful?

Again, there are a couple of errors in English. It should be "As a well-spent day brings happy sleep, so the use of Kems Insecticide Spray gives a good night's sleep." (I assume this is what you mean.)

This makes more sense than the first version, but for me it still doesn't sound right. There is still not the correct relationship between the two things for the "As ... so ..." pattern to be really approriate.

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