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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Do I need a comma before "when" in the following sentence?

Despite having loving grandparents, I always wished to have a perfect family and a strong relationship with my parents when I began to realize that this wish would be unattainable.
  

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'when I began' defies logic. NOr does the contrastive subordination. I had loving grandparents , and I had always wished to have a perfect family and a strong relationship with my parents , but I began to realize that this wish would be unattainable.

— Mister Micawber

  • 'when I began' defies logic.
  • NOr does the contrastive subordination.
  • I had loving grandparents , and I had always wished to have a perfect family and a strong relationship with my parents , but I began to realize that this wish would be unattainable.
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The problem is that the time line does not make sense with those verb forms: 'always'...'when I began' defies logic. NOr does the contrastive subordination.

I had loving grandparents, and I had always wished to have a perfect family and a strong relationship with my parents, but I began to realize that this wish would be unattainable.
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