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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Your order was placed on Sept 2010 but shipment postponed to end Jan 2011. The goods were produced since Oct 2010, therefore, the date code was shown Oct. Please confirm to release the shipment
  

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Hi, Your order was placed on Sept 2010 but shipment postponed to end Jan 2011. The goods were produced since Oct 2010, therefore, the date code was shown Oct. Please confirm to release the shipment I've underlined some parts that you need to work on.

— Clive

  • Hi, Your order was placed on Sept 2010 but shipment postponed to end Jan 2011.
  • The goods were produced since Oct 2010, therefore, the date code was shown Oct.
  • Please confirm to release the shipment I've underlined some parts that you need to work on.
  • Also, start another sentence with 'Therefore'.
  • Try again?
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Hi,
Your order was placed on Sept 2010 but shipment postponed to end Jan 2011. The goods were produced since Oct 2010, therefore, the date code was shown Oct. Please confirm to release the shipment

I've underlined some parts that you need to work on.

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Hi teacher, please double-check again, thanks

Your order was placed in Sept 2010 but shipment request postponed to the end of Jan 2011. The goods were produce from Oct 2010 which the date code is shown Oct. Please accept to release the shipment
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Hi,
Your order was placed in Sept 2010 but shipment request postponed to the end of Jan 2011. The goods were produce in from Oct 2010 so which the date code is shown as Oct. Please accept release to of the shipment.

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