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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

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Please correct the following sentences. Thank you!!
I hope it is not too many...

They are titles of presentation slides.

-More than half of farming area in Japan is vegetable fields

-Most common organic produce in Japan is vegetables and rice

-Most common overseas organic produce is sugar cane

-Most of organic-labeled products are foreign products

-Majority of domestically processed organic food is tofu and soy milk

-Most common foreign-made organic processed food is sugar, molasses and boiled vegetables

- Domestic and foreign ratio of organic processed food is approx. 50:50

- Number of domestically raised organic chickens is 1000.
  

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-More than half the farmland in Japan is devoted to vegetable production - The main organic produce in Japan is vegetables and rice - The main imported organic produce is sugar cane - Most organic -labeled products are imported - The main domestically processed organic foods are tofu and soy milk - The main imported organic processed foods are sugar, molasses and boiled vegetables - The ratio of domestic to imported organic processed foods is approx. 50:50 - The number of domestically raised organic chickens is 1000 . (Surely this number is wrong!

  • -More than half the farmland in Japan is devoted to vegetable production - The main organic produce in Japan is vegetables and rice - The main imported organic produce is sugar cane - Most organic -labeled products are imported - The main domestically processed organic foods are tofu and soy milk - The main imported organic processed foods are sugar, molasses and boiled vegetables - The ratio of domestic to imported organic processed foods is approx.
  • 50:50 - The number of domestically raised organic chickens is 1000 .
  • (Surely this number is wrong!
  • That seems far too small )
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-More than half the farmland in Japan is devoted to vegetable production

-The main organic produce in Japan is vegetables and rice

-The main imported organic produce is sugar cane

-Most organic-labeled products are imported

-The main domestically processed organic foods are tofu and soy milk
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Thank you very much!

One question.
Is it more common to use articles for headlines of presentation slides?

Thanks again.
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Not always, but in your captions, I feel they are required for clarity.
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