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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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We noticed that 10 pcs goods will be sent by DHL under your company's account after the inspection is done / passed and the rest by one container sea shipment. Please confirm the forwarder as soon as possiable. We did not receive any shipping details before for PO xxx, please advise.
  

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I would touch this up a little. However, since I had to guess at what you wanted to say, I may have expressed this wrongly. My new language is in boldface, my deletions are crossed-out, and spelling corrections are underlined.

— Doctor D

  • I would touch this up a little.
  • However, since I had to guess at what you wanted to say, I may have expressed this wrongly.
  • My new language is in boldface, my deletions are crossed-out, and spelling corrections are underlined.
  • We noticed that 10 pcs goods pieces will be sent by DHL under your company's account after the inspection is complete done / passed and the rest by sea in a single container .
  • one container sea shipment.
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I would touch this up a little. However, since I had to guess at what you wanted to say, I may have expressed this wrongly. My new language is in boldface, my deletions are crossed-out, and spelling corrections are underlined.

We noticed that 10 pcs goods pieces will be sent by DHL under your company's account after the inspection is complete
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