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Nhi83 Posted 18 years ago
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Would you please help me saying the following sentence in a better way and grammatically correct? Thank you in advance for your help.

I’m currently assisting the City by helping to select venues for our upcoming 1st Annual Music and Arts Festival. We’re in search for a live jazz performance for our festival. We’ve heard that you have live jazz performance weekly at the bakery. If it’s all possible, would you please provide us contact information of this group or forward our information to an appropriate person to ask about this?
  

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I'm currently assisting the City by helping to select venues for our upcoming 1st Annual Music Festival. We are looking for a live jazz performance for our festival. We've heard that you have weekly live jazz performances at the bakery.

— Optilang

  • I'm currently assisting the City by helping to select venues for our upcoming 1st Annual Music Festival.
  • We are looking for a live jazz performance for our festival.
  • We've heard that you have weekly live jazz performances at the bakery.
  • If it's at all possible, would you please provide us with the contact information for the group(s), or forward our details on to them.
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I'm currently assisting the City by helping to select venues for our upcoming 1st Annual Music Festival. We are looking for a live jazz performance for our festival. We've heard that you have weekly live jazz performances at the bakery. If it's at all possible, would you please provide us with the contact information for the group(s), or forward our details on to them.
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Thank you for your help Optilang.
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