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Nancy1982 Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Hello:
Please help me with this paragraph. I’m trying to write a paragraph about a meeting I attended. Below is what the people at the meeting discussed. I don’t know how to put it in more readable sentences. So would somebody help me with it? I appreciate your help.
"I presented to the group what I have done and planned to accomplish. KIA, an auto company, plans to expand its center and Bob suggested we should call KIA and find out who their suppliers are so that maybe we can calling on these suppliers and tell them about Powder Springs has to offers. The other members emphasized that they do not want to see any heavy industrial development that can be done cheaply over sea. They worry that it will move to India or elsewhere after a while for cheap labor. One of the members also suggested a repair shop for trailer trucks would create more job opportunity. Another argued it would damage our road."
Please help me with this paragraph. I’m trying to write a paragraph about a meeting I attended. Below is what the people at the meeting discussed. I don’t know how to put it in more readable sentences. So would somebody help me with it? I appreciate your help.
"I presented to the group what I have done and planned to accomplish. KIA, an auto company, plans to expand its center and Bob suggested we should call KIA and find out who their suppliers are so that maybe we can calling on these suppliers and tell them about Powder Springs has to offers. The other members emphasized that they do not want to see any heavy industrial development that can be done cheaply over sea. They worry that it will move to India or elsewhere after a while for cheap labor. One of the members also suggested a repair shop for trailer trucks would create more job opportunity. Another argued it would damage our road."
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Nancy you keep posting bits and pieces of this all over the place. You've already had a lot of help with some of these sentences. I've just noticed that I've just spent time answering a post about a job description that you had already posted before and been helped with.
- Nancy you keep posting bits and pieces of this all over the place.
- You've already had a lot of help with some of these sentences.
- I've just noticed that I've just spent time answering a post about a job description that you had already posted before and been helped with.
- Please don't keep asking for help on the same pieces of writing as it wastes our volunteer helpers' time.
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Nancy you keep posting bits and pieces of this all over the place. You've already had a lot of help with some of these sentences. I've just noticed that I've just spent time answering a post about a job description that you had already posted before and been helped with. Please don't keep asking for help on the same pieces of writing as it wastes our volunteer helpers' time.
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