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ESL123 Posted 22 years ago
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High School versus College
Peoples are born to learn through out our life. Sometimes we can be self teach but most of the time we need to go to school in other to learn. School plays a major role in all of us. Many of us will spend more than fifteen years in school in order for us to get a better job in the future. All those years are divided into several levels. Most of us are lucky enough to go through the two most important levels, which is high school and college. High school will prepare us for college and college will prepare us for our career. Even those some people would think they are almost similar, yet there are significance differences between them.


The cost of college is much more expensive than the cost of high school. Most of our high school tuition is pay by our parent taxes, other is high school is also pay by your parent because u either attend a private high school or catholic high school. When you are in college, you have to pay the tuition by yourself and if you are lucky your parent will pay for you. This is the reason why some of the low income family can’t afford for their son or daughter to go to college. Also in college, students have to buy their own books which can cost up to one thousand dollars whereas in high school students borrow books from the school for a year. The life of college is more intense than the life of high school. In college you go to class less and the work load is much higher than in high school. Unlike high school there is no written homework home on the board everything is on syllabus. In college there are no bells or tardy slip and you can leave the room without asking the professor. The bond between you and your professor is not that strong because you will unlike to meet or talk with your professor. In college, there are only 3 or 4 test in one semester sometime there is no test at all but only the final exam. Those exams consist of larger percentage of your grade than your high school final exam ever did. In college if you screw up you are done but in high school if you are screw up you can sweet talk your way out of it. All of us live with our parent when we are in high school, but in college we get to live with our friend or our roommate which we will become friend with them after a long period of time. College students start their weekend on Thursday with drinking, partying, and clubbing because most of them don’t have class on Friday or they have to go home on the weekend. College students does not have curfew they can stay out as late as they want. Unlike college, high school students start their weekend on Friday night with a football game or movies. Most of them have to be home at 11 if they are lucky enough their parents will let them stay out until 12. Some lie to their parent that they are sleeping over their friend house so they can stay out late. In high school students can not go out to lunch because it’s not allowed. Unlike high school, in college you can not go out to lunch because you can not afford it.
  

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Just a few quick comments: through out - 1 word Work on your passive voice -- teach taught taught, etc etc. Don't use abbreviations like u Quite wordy

  • Just a few quick comments: through out - 1 word Work on your passive voice -- teach taught taught, etc etc.
  • Don't use abbreviations like u Quite wordy
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Just a few quick comments:

through out - 1 word
Work on your passive voice -- teach taught taught, etc etc.
Don't use abbreviations like u

Quite wordy
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This needs 6-10 paragraphs at least, not just two.

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