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Cat air 206 Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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write an email to your friend and describe a festival or a special event in Viet Nam

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hey Madai Lopez

Long time no see, how you doing? Last month, in my place there was be a big festival, it is a Am Chua festival. Am Chua festival is celebrated at the Am Chua relic on Dai An mountain in Dien khanh District, Khanh Hoa Province. Held from the 1st to the 3rd of the 3rd lunar month. This is an opportunity for local people and tourist to express their gratitude to the Holy Mother Thien Y A Na and pray for good things in life. The festival consists of two parts: the ceremony and the festival. After the opening ceremony, the traditional ceremony took place. Pilgrimage delegations perform singing and dancing respectively, praising the merit of the Holy Mother Thien Y A Na , expressing the idyllic dream of the people to pray for the state and the people, rain and wind, fresh crops well. The offerings of the people to the Holy Mother are usually agricultural products, fruit flower are formed into beautiful shapes. I really like this festival, almost very every year I go. Next year, if you have a freetime, to invite you to join with me

Love

Hien

  

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There are some mistakes you should corect, I think: - How you doing-> how’s it going, how are you doing? are singing That’s all In general, I’m high appreciated your letter, it’s enough to express your sincerity. Many thanks

— Annhien1029

  • There are some mistakes you should corect, I think: - How you doing-> how’s it going, how are you doing?
  • are singing That’s all In general, I’m high appreciated your letter, it’s enough to express your sincerity.
  • Many thanks
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There are some mistakes you should corect, I think:

- How you doing-> how’s it going, how are you doing?

- Held...-> it was held

- ...are singing

That’s all

In general, I’m high appreciated your letter, it’s enough to express your sincerity. Many thanks

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Hey Maria, dai Lopez

Long time no see. How are you doing? Last month, in my place there was

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