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It has been reported by the client that they need a demonstration on the equipment supplied earlier. They did not quite understand when the demonstration was carried out, so please arrange for our supplier to demostrate one more time for this equipment so that they can start to operate it accordingly.
  

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It has been reported by the client that they need a second demonstration of the equipment supplied earlier. They did not quite understand the first demonstration. Please arrange for our supplier to demonstrate this equipment one more time so that they can learn to operate it properly.

  • It has been reported by the client that they need a second demonstration of the equipment supplied earlier.
  • They did not quite understand the first demonstration.
  • Please arrange for our supplier to demonstrate this equipment one more time so that they can learn to operate it properly.
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It has been reported by the client that they need a second demonstration of the equipment supplied earlier. They did not quite understand the first demonstration. Please arrange for our supplier to demonstrate this equipment one more time so that they can learn to operate it properly.

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