please healp me correct grammar a letter send to employer

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my address:Tp Ðà N?ng, October 28, 2007APPLICATION LETTERRESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer . I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level). I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company. Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached. Sincerely yours!                                                                                                  writter                                                                                          Lê Quang Trung

Marius Hancu · Accepted Answer

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

Lê Quang Trung

Quangtrungvtv · Answer

Marius Hancu

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

Lê Quang Trung

Why did you give me some advice?

Feebs11 · Answer

Quangtrungvtv
Marius Hancu
APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

Lê Quang Trung
Why did you give me some advice?

Are you asking "Why did you not give me some advice?"

Marius has indicated where you made errors. If you check these in a dictionary, you may be able to correct them yourself. If you still cannot find an answer, ask again about the ones that are a problem.

As a matter of the way in which to write a letter to a company in which you do not have a contact, You address it to "Human Relations Department", and with an opening salutation "Dear sir/madam,"ending with Yours faithfullt". This site gives lots of information on how to write letters: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/549/01/

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