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I am of the opinion that universities should provide students with knowledge and some related skills and there are several reasons for such a perspective.

First of all,I strongly believe that knowledge and skills both are useful for employer,a typical case example being in medical university which it learns skills with theorical courses to student in nature environment.Moreover,it has been said that knowladge and skills can be cause student to be expert in its field,In addition I suppose one can say that university can provide trains about laws of related knowlage for instance as in the case of learning accounting in university is neccessery for accuntant becuase of without of knowing related laws of accounting,it may cause some problems.I can also see the merits of a university should be to give access to knowledge without passing the courses.

First off I must any that knowledge is necessery for get job,such as in the case of some companies for recuitment employer related experience.

In addition,I believe that experince make deep learning in each field of job like in the case of nursing.they can do sometimes like doctors doing with patients.

Based on the aformentioned argument I would like to reinterate that in my personal opinion,universities should study knowledge as realated skills as to students that it cause get a convienent job and it has moreadvantages and has greater merit.




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some people think that universities should provide graduates with the
knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. others think
that the true function of a university should be to give access
to knowledge for its own sake,regardless of whether the course is
useful to an employer. what in you opinoin
should be the main function of a university?
I write it but I don't know its good or not... please please some one help me and I will be appraciate if you can correct me

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I have highlighted in yellow some places that need your attention. I have also made some comments and corrections. If you have any questions, please ask.

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