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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Please grammar check!
Hi!
This is a part of an advertisment text. Could you please take a look whether it is okay gramatically? Maybe some mistakes with articles? Something seems clumsy?
Gentle sunlight that fills the room through the window covered with lace curtains, butterflies dancing in the garden and in your favorite cups, rosy blanket thrown over white bed frame, and airy zephyr foam on the flowery cake plate. Experience your romantic dream right away!
Thanks!
This is a part of an advertisment text. Could you please take a look whether it is okay gramatically? Maybe some mistakes with articles? Something seems clumsy?
Gentle sunlight that fills the room through the window covered with lace curtains, butterflies dancing in the garden and in your favorite cups, rosy blanket thrown over white bed frame, and airy zephyr foam on the flowery cake plate. Experience your romantic dream right away!
Thanks!
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The only error I see is that the first is not a complete sentence, which may be okay in some situations, such as a description for advertising.
- The only error I see is that the first is not a complete sentence, which may be okay in some situations, such as a description for advertising.
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The only error I see is that the first is not a complete sentence, which may be okay in some situations, such as a description for advertising.
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