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Bee purple 722 Posted 4 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please grade my IELTS writing task 2

In conclusion, a cash gift is equally as meaningful as others to the young. However, money still accommodates daily needs, which is an essential factor for the young, more than other gifts, that provides a short period of comfort.

I know, actually, writing is my worst skill but I'm trying my best to improve, I will make sure to read your recommendation carefully.
I hope this will cover both body paragraphs right.

  

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bee purple 722 trying my best to improv e. I will make sure That was a comma splice error. bee purple 722 I hope think this will cover s both body paragraph s, righ t?

— Teechr

  • bee purple 722 trying my best to improv e.
  • I will make sure That was a comma splice error.
  • bee purple 722 I hope think this will cover s both body paragraph s, righ t?
  • No.
  • See below.
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bee purple 722trying my best to improve. I will make sure

That was a comma splice error.

bee purple 722I hope think this will covers both body paragraph
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