Please grade my IELTS writing task 2
In conclusion, I believe that based on the teenager's purpose of using, cash can be gifted if it is for the right rationale. Moreover, at this stage of age, the youth are developing to adapt to their surroundings so the adolescents should try to comfort them with a physical gift or a gift of advice.
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No. That is no good. 1- Do not introduce new ideas/points in a conclusion.
- No.
- That is no good.
- 1- Do not introduce new ideas/points in a conclusion.
- 2- Cut out the waffle.
- " 3- You did not pay attention to what I wrote above!
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No. That is no good.
1- Do not introduce new ideas/points in a conclusion.
2- Cut out the waffle. "In conclusion, I believe that based on the teenager's purpose of using, a cash gift ..."
3- You did not pay attention to what I wrote above! Summarize the main points/ideas from the body paragraphs.
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