Please grade my IELTS Task 2

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Industrialization and globalization not only boost the economy of the world but also increase the number of rubbish at a very alarm rate. In this essay, I will discuss some main reasons lead to this waste trend and offer some solutions.

Economic grows have expanded the number of industry areas all over the world. This due to the demand for products of the rapidly growing of population. Furthermore, people usually change their lifestyles so swiftly with the fashion. This not only rises the number of products but also waste a huge amount of the earth’s resources which already on the edge of exhausted. The government can answer this with heavy taxes on the raw materials. Producers can choice between recycle their old products to make fashion one or abandon quantity and focus on the quality of their products.

The second reason of waste is the demand for food, this also rises the number of containers which usually are plastic. In many countries, the governments have banned plastic bags out of supermarkets and stores, Europe for example. They also put heavy laws in order to reduce the harmful activities of industries such as plastic disposal and encourage environmentally activities such as using green energy. But with the convenient of plastic, we need a new environmentally friendly and naturally decompose material to replace it. In the meantime, paper bags and or decompose plastic can cover somehow, yet, those materials quite expensive and the future without plastics still so far away.

In conclusion, the main reasons increase of garbage is harmful products and rise of population. The governments all over the world need to find out the solutions for this global issues. The public also needs to awareness for their own actions and take responsibility for this trend.