Please giveme a hand, Statement of motivation

Hi everybody. This is my statement of motivation to present to a University in Netherlands, I sure that I have mistakes, but I have read it three times and I didn't find anyone.
Please Help me!!!


I am xxxxxxxx; I studied xxxxxxxx in the xxxxxxxx, which is a state university inxxx. I graduated on April, xxxxx and at the present time I am working ixxxxx and I am the secretary of The Permanent Technical Commission of xxxxxxxxx.

I think that Geo-Information sciences are a powerful tool in socio-cultural, economic and environmental development of a region, city or country. For example, in my work, this science has been used to carry out projects that improve the social environment around an airport. A geographic study showed that almost 80% population who live around the airport has hearing illness and that more than 75% of these citizens live near head runways, which are places where aircrafts’ engines generate more noise.

On the other hand, this science has been a fundamental support to attain my academic and professional goals. Nevertheless, I perceive that my knowledge and my performance as regard Geo-information science are not strongly developed; thus, they are completely necessary for me to improve my studies in this discipline.
Certainly, I wish to focus my studies on my country’s development, a third-world country, that need specialized engineers with a high academic level to create new projects as construction of more and better airports that would promote an efficiently mobility, traffic and transport of people and cargo. Those projects would close poor communities to a better quality of life; but on the same time, they should propound a sustainable human developing and they should permit a synergy among humans and environment.

I strongly believe that I can be part of this kind of projects and I strongly believe that Msc GEM course is the program where I can achieve my goals, being a master degree with four universities with a excellent recognize in four amazing countries, where I can improve and develop all my knowledge, and it is a master degree which offer me an opportunity to discover Europe and more additional advantages. Found xxx engineers like xxxxx, who was a student of the same university that I was, who studied Msc GEM, and who now is part of the ITC like a excel professional, its for me a pride and a engineer to following.

In conclusion, I think that I am a person who can be part of the change in my country or anyplace where my knowledge could be necessary and with your help I would be more close to reach my goals. I am very interested and motivated to study at your program. Feel free to contact me at any time concerning additional queries or comments regarding my motivation.

Thanks