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Butterfly60 Posted 15 years ago
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That night of Sunday 17 April 2011, I was in my house, Wifaq District, Temara. My wife and child were away and since I drunk a lot of coffee and slept about three hours during the day, I had gone to bed very late. At a moment, when I was deeply sleeping, I felt a bitter sensation in my mouth. First I thought it was part of a dream, but gradually I was awaken, and when the aching became unbearable I leapt up to my feet and found that I had bit my tongue. I felt as though a heavy bundle of meat was hanging from the tip of my tongue. I thought that I did not only hurt it but slit it and even a part of it may have been already lost forever. I was seized by horror.

I went to the toilet and stood in front of the big glasses. I opened my mouth and held out my tongue. It's front part was dark red. I went back to my bed and lay on my left side and my mouth segregated a lot of saliva that I got rid of by spiting it over the floor. The aching continued for about 10 minutes and then subsided. I surrendered to a deep sleep from which I didn't got up until 10 in the morning.
  

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Hi butterfly60, I suggest you to take; 1. B-complex tablet or capsule once daily after meals for 5 days. 2.

  • Hi butterfly60, I suggest you to take; 1.
  • B-complex tablet or capsule once daily after meals for 5 days.
  • 2.
  • Folic acid tablet once daily after meals for 5 days.
  • 3.
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Hi butterfly60,

I suggest you to take;

1. B-complex tablet or capsule once daily after meals for 5 days.
2. Folic acid tablet once daily after meals for 5 days.
3. Take a glass of water and add one tea spoon full of salt and gagle it two times daily.

You will be alright in just 3 days.

Regards,
Sri
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Dear All,

Is there anybody who can give any advice, comment on my writing?

thanks

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