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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Please give suggestion
Hi all,
I have a task to publish a new organization structure. Please kindly give suggestion, because after I read again and again, I find it not so formal and nice.
Thanks all...
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Dear all,
We officially publish MNN Department. This team will support Forcasting System and help us on any Forcasting System issue. Please refer to the attached file for the organization structure and job descriptions.
All new MNN operators must be trained and certified by Mr Philip or Mrs Joe, before they are allowed to operate MNN. Please liaise with them if there is any new MNN operator.
Kindly help and support them
Best Regards
Chelsie
"
I have a task to publish a new organization structure. Please kindly give suggestion, because after I read again and again, I find it not so formal and nice.
Thanks all...
"
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Dear all,
We officially publish MNN Department. This team will support Forcasting System and help us on any Forcasting System issue. Please refer to the attached file for the organization structure and job descriptions.
All new MNN operators must be trained and certified by Mr Philip or Mrs Joe, before they are allowed to operate MNN. Please liaise with them if there is any new MNN operator.
Kindly help and support them
Best Regards
Chelsie
"
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[Here is how I would word this. However, I am not certain I know in all cases what you are trying to say. ] Dear Colleagues: We officially publish materials for the MNN Department.
- [Here is how I would word this.
- However, I am not certain I know in all cases what you are trying to say.
- ] Dear Colleagues: We officially publish materials for the MNN Department.
- ] This team will support the For e casting System and help us on any For e casting System issue.
- Please refer to the attached file for the organization structure and job descriptions.
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[Here is how I would word this. However, I am not certain I know in all cases what you are trying to say. The new language is in boldface.]
Dear Colleagues:
We officially publish materials for the MNN Department. [You need to identify what "team" you are talking about.] This team will support the Forecasting System and help
Dear Colleagues:
We officially publish materials for the MNN Department. [You need to identify what "team" you are talking about.] This team will support the Forecasting System and help
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