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n many countries there has been an increase in social problems involving teenagers in recent years. Many people believe that this is due to modern lifestyles because parents spend more and more time at work and have less time to supervise their children. To what extent do you believe this is true?

There are many increasing problems related to adolescents. These problems are not mainly related to the parents’ less attention to their children but it is linked to the widely available technological devices. Therefore there should be clever monitor of use of the electronic device for children.

First of all, widely accessible electronic devices lead negative impact on the teens. Nowadays, everyone can access to the Internet via Smartphone, laptop and PC. Teenagers use these devices and access whatever they want to see or play. They can use them whenever and wherever. Using the Internet they watch violent movies. It is so obvious that violent movies influence teens’ psychology and lead to aggressive behavior. Also, they spend too much time playing Internet games. They are addicted to these games.
Secondly, adolescents’ usage of the electronic devices and Internet should be controlled. In order to solve those problems, government and parents should monitor the use of the Internet. Free Wi-Fi should be restricted around school areas. Only promoted web sites or time limits of Internet should be allowed in schools. Government schould ban adult’s web sites. Parents should allow children to use computers and the Internet under their control. Also, parents should not encourage the children to use smart mobiles.
In conclusion, in modern days, teen’s problems are caused by uncontrolled technological usages. Hence, there should be wise controls of authorities and parents. /232 words/