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Soso7777 Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Please give me your opinions

Hi everyone,

I want to send an email to the supervisor of the labs i work in to finish my thesis.I still need thier support to the next year but i don't know how to end the email!

Please give me your notes on my draft..

Dear Dani ,

As the year comes to an end, I’d like to express sincere gratitude and thanks for all your help and support.

I also want to thank Sami and Darwin for their assistance and valuable guidance and advice.

In addition, I’d like to thank Jack for his full support, time and help in my experiments set up.

I’ll be grateful for you and for the whole group that gave and still give the assistance for the year ahead that I need to finish my Master.

Best regards,

Soso
  

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The first part is fine. See below for edits to this part: In addition, I’d like to thank Jack for his full support, time and help in my experiments set up. " Best regards, Soso try: In addition, I'd like to thank Jack for his full support, time, and help in setting up my experiments.

  • The first part is fine.
  • See below for edits to this part: In addition, I’d like to thank Jack for his full support, time and help in my experiments set up.
  • " Best regards, Soso try: In addition, I'd like to thank Jack for his full support, time, and help in setting up my experiments.
  • I am very grateful to you and the whole group for your past help, and would appreciate your continuing assistance in the year ahead as I work to complete my Master's degree.
  • etc.
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The first part is fine. See below for edits to this part:

In addition, I’d like to thank Jack for his full support, time and help in my experiments set up.

I’ll be grateful for you and for the whole group that gave and still give the assistance for the year ahead that I need to finish my Master."

Best regards,

Soso

try:

In addition, I'd like
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Thank you very much sam.. I appreciate your helpEmotion: smile

Soso
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sam1947The first part is fine. See below for edits to this part:
In addition, I’d like to thank Jack for his full support, time and help in my experiments set up.
I’ll be grateful for you and for the whole group that gave and still give the assistance for the year ahead that I need to finish my Master."
Best regards,
Soso
try:
In addition, I'd li
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If by "title", you mean what to put in the subject line, I would put something such as:

Thank you!

or,

In appreciation

or

In thanks for all of your help and support

You might want to consider writing a handwritten note, addressing it to, "My Colleagues and Mentors in the Lab". If you are mailing it, you could address it as follows:

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Dear Sam,

Your assistance and guidance are very much appreciated.

Many thanks,

Soso

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